The Rain King ([info]cadhla) wrote,
@ 2004-03-22 18:39:00
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Iron Poet, Round V.
Welcome to the latest round of Iron Poet, the game where you give me three words and I give you a poem. This is an adaptation of a standard writer's workshop activity, and I do not claim the original concept. I just claim to enjoy doing it.

The rules:

1. You must give me three words. This part isn't optional. Please note that this isn't a game of 'stump Seanan'; I'd be happier if you selected words you actually wanted to see in a poem, rather than trying to be arbitrarily difficult. Groups of two or more words, like 'purple sock' or 'left turn' still count as two or more words.

2. You can choose to give me a poetic style, assuming your words were not sadistic. Naturally trochiac words when you're asking for a sonnet, for example, may get you swatted. I am the final judge of what is or is not a sadistic word.

3. I will not write acrostics, limericks, poems which depend on a visual layout or any style which by definition must be more than a hundred lines in length.

4. Because the selected words are random from my perspective, you cannot request a mood as your poetic form. You can indicate a preference, which I will try to fill, but I make no guarantees.

5. Please put all word groups in original comments, not as replies to someone else's comment. Things tend to thread, and I may miss you if you add your words to someone else's.

Let the games begin!

This round is now CLOSED.



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Yay, Iron Poet!
[info]kyrielle
2004-03-22 06:50 pm UTC (link)
nova, rise, swallow.

I leave the form up to you.

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The Sanctity of You.
[info]cadhla
2004-03-22 11:50 pm UTC (link)
You rise like the sun, graceful as morning,
And I am stunned once more by the sanctity of you.
Let this be your temple: here, the circle of my arms,
The feel of dry salt kisses on your temples,
The warm embrace of blankets on your thighs.
I will bring swallows and ravens to roost in our eaves;
I will bring acolytes to worship before you,
If only you will stay and dance the morning
Down for me.

In another age, you would have been a goddess,
Feet anointed with scented oils, hips girded with gold,
Lips painted with the dust of diamonds, so that your kisses cut.
In another age, you would not have loved me,
For I am just a temple dancer, feet made for wicker shoes,
Kisses bought for lesser coin than yours.
The nova-bright skirl of your hair would have burned
For some far richer soul than I...
But we are here and now, and you burn in my arms.

You fall like the moon, sacred as evening,
And I am lost once more in the reality of you.

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Re: The Sanctity of You. - [info]ocean_song, 2004-03-24 12:49 am UTC (Expand)
Re: The Sanctity of You. - [info]kyrielle, 2004-03-24 09:00 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]tibicina
2004-03-22 06:53 pm UTC (link)
Mercy Tired Brains

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These Three Things.
[info]cadhla
2004-03-22 11:57 pm UTC (link)
Man is made distinct from beast by these
Three things and these alone,
Whatever wise men try to tell you,
Whatever pastors preach:
By brains that see the wonder in the world,
To name the colours in a rainbow
And the strange fish of the sea;
By hearts which know the magic of the world,
To love the shadow of the forest
And the icy breath of winter's chill;
And most of all, by mercy, to offer arms
To those who are tired, who are lost,
Who have too far left to go,
And say to them, 'You belong
Within the fellowship of man; you are my brother,
And I love you, even now, at the ending of all things.'

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[info]porpentine
2004-03-22 06:54 pm UTC (link)
serenity, black, moon

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Monochrome.
[info]cadhla
2004-03-23 12:19 am UTC (link)
The waves break black, white, silver
Along the beach that glimmers pale
As explosed bone in the moonlight, aged
Gray and empty of everything but silence.
There were bloody footprints, once, to mar that sand;
There was distant singing in that crashing sea.
Now the world is monochrome, empty of variation,
While the rocks in cold serenity stand silent through the tides.

The tale, they say, has always been an old one:
She was a daughter of the dreaming deeps,
Bright-scaled, guileless in her movements, in her stillness,
In the way she slide her hands along the reforged outlines
Of a body she had bought with songs and laughter.
Her steps left stains across the belly of the world,
Red exclaimations of her passing,
But she never wept, never cried out;
Never did a thing but smile.

Her hair was silver as that moon, as the scales she shed;
Her eyes were deep-water blue, and her skin was pale
Until she danced out in the sun, and then it was red
As the tracks of blood she left behind her.
Oh, how she loved you, oh, how she cared;
She was luckier than her sisters, in that you loved her back,
And her handmaidens say that when the needle struck her finger --
When she saw the three drops of telling blood burn bright
Against the whiteness of the snow --
She did not cry, but put her embroidery aside,
Walked to the cliff and lept like a diving bird, arms stretched wide,
Back into the arms of the world she had forsaken.

She could bear the bleeding for your sake.
She would not bear it for her daughter.
For all that she had loved you -- and perhaps she loves you still --
She could not face a future red as blood and white as snow.

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Re: Monochrome. - [info]tibicina, 2004-03-23 03:44 pm UTC (Expand)
Re: Monochrome. - [info]wytchchyld, 2004-03-27 09:10 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]delennara
2004-03-22 06:56 pm UTC (link)
WOW!!You are doing it again! And it looks like I get to comment before it closes!
*happy dance*

So, my 3 words are: sea, fairy, longing

No other preferences.

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A Mother's Gift.
[info]cadhla
2004-03-23 12:43 am UTC (link)
She dries the dishes, sweeps the floor,
And dreams but of the sea.
Her daughters run along the shore --
She doesn't watch them anymore --
For she knows what's to be.
She dries the dishes, sweeps the floor,
And dreams but of the sea.

Her longing she need not conceal;
Her dreams will not come true.
This fate is hers, this life is real --
No skies will change, no seas reveal
An answer or a clue.
Her longing she need not conceal;
Her dreams will not come true.

She was a fairy of the waves,
A selkie girl, unbound...
She was not meant for dust or graves.
Hers is the heart no mercy saves.
She's trapped on human ground.
She was a fairy of the waves,
A selkie girl. Unbound.

He stole her skin and stole her life --
He never told her why.
She's been his servant, been his wife.
She drops the broom, takes up the knife --
A prisoner can die.
He stole her skin and stole her life.
He never told her why.

There is no road to take her home;
Her daughters have a chance.
If they can take her to the foam,
Her flesh will split, and they can roam,
To see the seas, and dance.
There is no road to take her home.
Her daughters have a chance.

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Re: A Mother's Gift. - [info]bardling, 2004-04-16 04:18 am UTC (Expand)

[info]mlion
2004-03-22 07:03 pm UTC (link)
lilacs
grace
hopscotch

your choice of form

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Potential.
[info]cadhla
2004-03-23 12:25 pm UTC (link)
We're born into a state of grace,
Potential given skin.
Eyes open, we begin
To shape the world and make a place.
We chalk our lives on empty space,
And play the game to win,
Hopping out and dancing in,
A hopscotch grid we all must face.

We're born into the chance and change:
The dealer counts the cards.
The king assigns the guards.
We name the stars and think them strange,
Grow lilac dreams and rearrange
The strength of hope's regard.
Our hands are warm, if scarred,
And open hearts, ours to exchange.

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Re: Potential. - [info]mlion, 2004-03-23 04:01 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]closer2myself
2004-03-22 07:06 pm UTC (link)
Wow! This is the first time I've gotten to do this!

Fecund, lava, mosaic.

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And Dreaming...
[info]cadhla
2004-03-23 10:51 pm UTC (link)
Volcanos dream like women,
Hot, buried underneath the earth,
Gathering their hopes in fire,
Their needs in boiling stone,
Until -- fecund with desire --
They birth their burning children
Out into the land.

Oceans dream like women,
Cold, stretched vast around the earth,
Gathering their needs in water,
Their hopes in time and tides,
Until -- lonely and afraid --
They flood the waiting shores
With freezing tears.

Where the water meets the land,
Fire and ice may meet, and join,
And form a shatter-sharp mosaic,
Pieces in constant contradiction,
Tiles of ash and frozen lava.

Worlds dream like women,
And dreaming, all things wait.

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Re: And Dreaming... - [info]vixyish, 2004-03-26 12:28 pm UTC (Expand)
Game on!
[info]silverkun
2004-03-22 07:07 pm UTC (link)
Puzzle
Rebound
Unfettered

And since this is likely going to be one of your first entries, we'll start slow; choose the style.

There ya go, beautiful. It's all you.

-Silver

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Cinderella on the Rebound.
[info]cadhla
2004-03-25 08:46 am UTC (link)
She danced like Cinderella on the rebound,
Ginger on her long-bruised feet (glass slippers
Show no mercy, give no ground for frail things
Like flesh), graceful in her cotton and her plaid.
How could she be anything but lovely?
She was experience still innocent, a fairy tale
Unfettered by the cruel and binding chains
They hang on 'happy ever after'.
Her arms ascribed the circle of her influence,
And her hips rocked out the promise
Of a new story, a new beginning, in a room
Where second-hand curtains blocked the windows out.

The puzzle never was that she existed:
It was only and always why she took so long to come.

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Re: Cinderella on the Rebound. - [info]silverkun, 2004-03-25 09:43 am UTC (Expand)
Re: Cinderella on the Rebound. - [info]cadhla, 2004-03-25 09:45 am UTC (Expand)

[info]tigerbright
2004-03-22 07:16 pm UTC (link)
Athena
Hera
Aphrodite

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The Wishes of Goddesses.
[info]cadhla
2004-04-05 04:42 pm UTC (link)
Aphrodite yearns for honest love;
Affection fueled by something more
Than passion, longer-lived than lust.
She watches young girls with sunburnt faces
Walk along the river banks,
Watches young men bring them roses,
And wishes, wistful, that she were less beautiful.
Perfection, like frailty, has its costs.

Hera yearns for honesty alone;
A marriage bed that is not cold at night,
A hearth that harbours something more than yearning.
She watches housewives with swelling bellies
Sweep their earthen floors,
Watches husbands bring them kisses,
And wishes, wistful, that she were less faithful.
Perfection is a burden for the lost.

Wise Athena yearns for pretty lies;
Words that she could use to shield herself
From what her texts and tasks have shown to her.
She watches proud Olympus stand in glory,
Arrogant and ignorant of change,
Watches the years arode away foundations,
And wishes, wistful, that she knew fewer secrets.
Perfection is no shield against the frost.

These are the wishes of goddesses.
These are the dreams that each knew
Never would be answered.
Perfection is how all things count the cost.

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Re: The Wishes of Goddesses. - [info]tigerbright, 2004-04-06 08:14 am UTC (Expand)
Re: The Wishes of Goddesses. - [info]cadhla, 2004-04-06 11:15 am UTC (Expand)

[info]ceolyn
2004-03-22 07:18 pm UTC (link)
fragrant, moth, dichotomy

Per my usual I leave the poetry making up to you.

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Summer Spread Her Arms.
[info]cadhla
2004-04-05 04:57 pm UTC (link)
The midnight air was fragrant with jasmine,
Sweet with summer strawberries, and your lips,
Red even in the moonlight (see the dichotomy
of the half-lit moon, dark and bright at once,
like life, like lies, like a woman by my side)
Parted for my fingers, opening like the doors
To some far distant, cleaner land.
You would have been my Eden, and I
Would have planted flowers in the valleys
Of your thighs.

The summer nights spread out before us,
Endless in their lazy hours, silent in dreams,
As you tangled fingers in my corn-gold hair,
Eyebrows arched like question marks above
Your dizzy-coloured eyes, and whispered lies
That you were never thinking you would keep.
We danced the dance of moth and candleflame,
Both believing that we were the stronger,
But when the moon was overwhelmed by one side
Or the other, it was the brightness that faded,
Falling into dark, as you smiled your last
And summer spread her arms for fall.

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[info]wytchchyld
2004-03-22 07:18 pm UTC (link)
clear, effective, bluebird

Form up to you.

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Song For a Sailor's Wife.
[info]cadhla
2004-04-05 05:04 pm UTC (link)
Was the night wind clear, love?
Was the night wind clear?
Did it bring you what you needed,
Did it speak, and did you heed it,
Did it tell you what you really had to hear?
Was the night wind clear, love?
Was the night wind clear?

Were the stars too far, love?
Were the stars too far?
Was your coming back elective,
Were the lessons too effective,
Did you choose to stay exactly where you are?
Were the stars too far, love?
Were the stars too far?

Will the morning come, love?
Will the morning come?
Will you rise to hear the bluebird,
Will you offer me a kind word,
Will you turn away still silent and so numb?
Will the morning come, love?
Will the morning come?

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[info]zou
2004-03-22 07:19 pm UTC (link)
chewy
robot
chicken

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Clockwork Chickens, Take Two.
[info]cadhla
2004-04-05 05:25 pm UTC (link)
"Earl," I said, "I have grown adjusted
To being the wife of a mad scientist;
I've even become accustomed to the way
Our darling little girl, with her golden curls
And scabby knees, insists on trying to bring
The neighbor's cat back from its lonely grave.
The human mind is infinitely flexible,
And I don't just mean what you can do with pliars.
I think I am an open-minded woman, Earl.
But doomsday rays are still a little much
For a third-grade science fair."

Life with Earl was always quite exciting;
Marriage to a man who brags about
Being the latest in a long line of mad scientists
Is something like jumping rope on a balance beam
Suspended over lava -- an idea that I'm sure Earl
Would find appealing.
These are things that married life has taught me:

Human brains are dismayingly chewy.

Radiation works better than Miracle-Gro,
And cheaper, too, since plants treated in this way
Will often eat the neighbors rather than demanding more.

The American legal system does not look kindly
On people whose houseplants eat the neighbors.
Canada, however, is far more understanding.
I'm still not sure just how this works,
But Earl says I really shouldn't ask.

Orbital mind control lasers make great anniversary gifts,
But it's generally considered rude to use them
To make your daughter take a second nap.
Even if she really, really needs it.
Even if she blew up the classroom hamster
Using a mixture of cesium and oatmeal.
Sometimes ethics are annoying.

Angry mobs don't care about your carpet.
Neither do out-of-control robots bent on destroying
All life as we know it.
Shambling horrors, strangely, do.

"Earl," I said, "I think that you can't argue
That I've learned to live the lifestyle you desire;
I have learned to look at midnight raids
On cemetary plots as 'nights out on the town',
And come to view your kraken as a pet.
I think, that all things being equal,
I've earned an upgrade on this stupid clockwork chicken.
Now go away, and don't come back
Until you've taught the thing
To lay eggs, and peck for corn, and crow."

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Re: Clockwork Chickens, Take Two. - [info]dormouse_in_tea, 2004-04-06 09:00 am UTC (Expand)

[info]sibylle
2004-03-22 07:41 pm UTC (link)
heathen
gods
arise

style ... hmm ... how about a vilanelle or a french rondeau?

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Rites of Spring.
[info]cadhla
2004-04-11 12:29 pm UTC (link)
We spread our heathen hands beneath the skies,
Sing back the spring in joyous harmony;
We wait here for the old gods to arise.

We trade our simple truth for simple lies,
Exchanging words to weave this sanctity;
We spread our heathen hands beneath the skies.

Is this the place where no faith ever dies?
The wheel of years shines green upon the tree.
We wait here for the old gods to arise.

So hold the fading winter as she cries;
Remind her that each change can set us free.
We spread our heathen hands beneath the skies,

We call the new sun down as winter flies,
Demanding that while ever more must be.
We wait here for the old gods to arise.

The wind blows warm; now hear the blissful sighs
Of those who keep this ancient litany.
We spread our heathen hands beneath the skies;
We wait here for the old gods to arise.

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[info]wcg
2004-03-22 07:55 pm UTC (link)
polycyclic aromatic hydrocarbons

Do as thou wilt, amazing one.

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Scientist's Love Song.
[info]cadhla
2004-04-11 12:43 pm UTC (link)
Let me sing you a scientist's love song:
I'm not so good at doing things this way.
We're both such strange attractors
But this feeling is so strong
That I fight through all the factors,
And still find I have to say...

If I were pure-state carbon
I would want you for my hydrogen,
And we'd make a hydrocarbon
That was purer than benzene.

And if I were polycylic,
I would let you ring my molecule;
This may all sound theoretic
But I'm saying what I mean.

Let me sing you a scientist's love song:
I'm not so good at sharing what I feel.
We're both such strong emitters
That I'm not sure this is real,
But you're giving me the jitters,
And I'm saying what I feel...

If I were aromatic
I would want you for my vector
To help cross-pollinate me
With the flowers all around,

And if I were a comet,
I would make you an aurora;
These are all things I am not.
But you're what I have found.

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Re: Scientist's Love Song. - [info]wcg, 2004-04-11 07:50 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]telynor
2004-03-22 08:01 pm UTC (link)
chrysanthemum
delirium
palladium

do what you will. :)

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Walls.
[info]cadhla
2004-04-11 12:57 pm UTC (link)
Let me twine my fingers through your gold and crimson curls --
Chrysanthemum locks for a hyacinth girl --
And hold you a while on the edge of this sea,
Waiting for what's to come, loving all that will be,
For you are the city, and I am your wall.
I swear I will catch you, should you chance to fall.

New love is delirium -- it gets tangled, but it's fine;
Old love has the sweetness of blackberry wine
That burns on the tongue like an ode to the days
When all of the world walked as if in a daze
And you were a goddess of life and of spring --
You were summer's queen, love, and needed no king.

Let me wind my fingers through the ribbons of your hair --
No city is sweeter, no township more fair --
And I, your palladium, will stand sentry here
To see that your seas and your skies remain clear,
For you are my lover and you are my heart,
And city and tower will never need part.

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[info]auctor
2004-03-22 08:25 pm UTC (link)
Wee! I get to enter this time! Yippee!

My words are ode, harpsichord, and lily.

Anything you like would be lovely, I'm sure :)

(Thanks for doing this again!)

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In Velvet.
[info]cadhla
2004-04-11 01:35 pm UTC (link)
I'll dress myself in velvet, I'll wear lilies in my hair,
I'll walk down to the crossroads, but I know you won't be there,
For the west wind is a liar and the east wind isn't fair;
You left me for a tower made of stone.

If I could find the words and will I'd write a bitter ode
About the way we walk away from all the things we're owed,
Abandoning our destinies to wander down this road...
I left you and I went along alone.

Ivory's for the harpsichord and silver's for the lyre;'
There's copper in the sleeping stone and ruby in the fire.
If ash is for the broken heart, then iron's for the liar.
I made this prison only on my own.

I'll dress myself in white and I'll bring violets to the shore;
I'll wait for you although you won't know what I'm waiting for.
I chose to walk this lonely road the night I locked the door,
And time has come to reap all I have sown.

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Re: In Velvet. - [info]stakebait, 2004-04-14 01:00 pm UTC (Expand)
Re: In Velvet. - [info]auctor, 2004-04-14 04:16 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]beable
2004-03-22 09:02 pm UTC (link)

numinous, amethyst, dreamer

A pantoum please.

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Abadazad.
[info]cadhla
2004-04-11 02:37 pm UTC (link)
There is a place where sorrow has no home --
I promise you, my dreamer, this is true --
Where seas are amethyst with diamond foam,
And even night skies have a golden hue,

(I promise you, my dreamer, this is true)
For magic lives in this numinous land,
And even night skies have a golden hue
Where wonder thrives and innocence is grand.

For magic lives in this numinous land!
There is a place where sorrow has no home:
Where wonder thrives and innocence is grand,
Where seas are amethyst with diamond foam.

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Re: Abadazad. - [info]beable, 2004-04-15 10:49 am UTC (Expand)

[info]goweli
2004-03-22 09:02 pm UTC (link)
I'll be nice this time. :)

Blue, books, summer

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Summer Queen.
[info]cadhla
2004-04-11 02:45 pm UTC (link)
The sea was blue, the grass was green;
The summer was one vast cliche,
And you were gold, the summer's queen,
There in that city by the bay,

Your eyes were old, your body young,
And oh, the fires were very bright;
The wine we drank, the songs we sung,
Were gifts to that midsummer's night.

The seasons changed, the winter came,
We turned the key and closed the book...
But I still know your secret name,
And you still hold the heart you took.

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[info]fireriven
2004-03-22 09:04 pm UTC (link)
coyote, blue jay, laughing

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When I Stop.
[info]cadhla
2004-04-11 03:08 pm UTC (link)
Why are you laughing, Coyote?
For Spring comes, and the world wakes;
See, the greatest joke of all endures.
What joke is this you're playing?
Time and all the many things it brings:
Time that changes men and minds and dynasties;
Time that winds the world like string.

See the blue jay in the dogwood tree?
He sings a song of springtime dawning,
Sings nesting, sex, life as is and to come;
He sings the world that I have made,
Coyote, trickster, who stole fire,
Who hung the sky, who spun the net of time.

Why are you laughing, Coyote?
For Winter fades, for the world moves on;
Our beginnings are forgotten, and I,
The Trickster, yet remain.
I did not know how far the joke could go.
I did not know just what I would begin.

Why are you laughing, Coyote?
Because when I stop, I weep.

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Re: When I Stop. - [info]fireriven, 2004-04-25 12:15 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]vaspider
2004-03-22 09:18 pm UTC (link)
I'm An Engineer.

n.n

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Hymn for an Engineer.
[info]cadhla
2004-04-13 08:40 pm UTC (link)
Adjust the keys that hold the world together;
Sauter all the breaks with blood and bone.
Two hands can make a difference,
One heart can turn the tide;
When they ask you why you did it,
Was it madness? Was it pride?
Just smile and tell them, "I'm an engineer."

Construct your walls to hold through any weather;
Close the gaps with steel and tears and stone.
Two hands can bridge the distance,
One heart can save the day;
When they ask you why you did it,
Was there any other way?
Just smile and tell them, "I'm an engineer."

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(no subject) - [info]vaspider, 2004-04-13 08:47 pm UTC (Expand)
(no subject) - [info]cadhla, 2004-04-15 01:01 am UTC (Expand)
(no subject) - [info]vaspider, 2004-04-15 04:07 am UTC (Expand)
Re: Hymn for an Engineer. - [info]browngirl, 2004-04-15 11:29 am UTC (Expand)
Re: Hymn for an Engineer. - [info]cadhla, 2004-04-15 01:35 pm UTC (Expand)
Re: Hymn for an Engineer. - [info]icewinddragon, 2004-05-16 04:08 pm UTC (Expand)
Re: Hymn for an Engineer. - [info]cadhla, 2004-05-17 09:09 am UTC (Expand)
In the name of those who will read it - [info]icewinddragon, 2004-05-17 03:51 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]joecoustic
2004-03-22 09:53 pm UTC (link)
waltz,
breeze,
burgundy

the rest is up to you,
thanks :).

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Nottingham Town.
[info]cadhla
2004-04-14 08:02 pm UTC (link)
The trees waltz in box-steps, leaves turned by the wind,
They sway with the breeze, trunks alert, branches bend,
And you are my dear in the burgundy gown,
The jewel on the brow of dear Nottingham Town.

The woods are a palace, and you are their queen,
The princess of spring and the goddess of green,
For you are the girl who finds ups in the downs,
The rose on the vine of dear Nottingham Town.

I can't tell you how and I can't tell you when,
But I know I'll be coming to see you again.
Of all the world's treasures, dear, you are the crown,
The heart and the hope of dear Nottingham Town.

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Re: Nottingham Town. - [info]joecoustic, 2004-04-14 09:15 pm UTC (Expand)
Re: Nottingham Town. - [info]cadhla, 2004-04-15 01:00 am UTC (Expand)

[info]allisona
2004-03-22 09:58 pm UTC (link)
forest, harmony, autumn.

Any form you choose!

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To Lorien.
[info]cadhla
2004-04-15 01:57 am UTC (link)
Now autumn comes to Lorien;
The forest sleeps at last.
Our age is fading, long days done.
Now autumn comes to Lorien.
Release it all into the wind;
Our days will never come again.
Our time is gone and past.
Now autumn comes to Lorien.
The forest sleeps at last.

Now sing the bitter harmony;
Let old hope breathe its last.
We set our sails across this sea.
Now sing the bitter harmony.
Forget all we have been and done
And turn our ships into the sun;
This age is fading fast.
Now sing the bitter harmony;
Let old hope breathe its last.

Now feel the days of summer end;
Our long age ends at last.
We will not break but may not bend;
Now feel the days of summer end.
The gold leaf tumbles from the tree;
This is the end that had to be.
The final stone is cast.
Now feel the days of summer end;
Our long age ends at last.

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Re: To Lorien. - [info]taeriel, 2004-04-15 01:48 pm UTC (Expand)
Re: To Lorien. - [info]cadhla, 2004-04-15 03:37 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]patoadam
2004-03-22 10:16 pm UTC (link)
O noble Iron One, I have the same form request as last time. I would like something in the style of Milton's "On Time" (not to be confused with Milton's "Too Late" :-) ). Specifically, I would like a variety of rhyme schemes and a variety of line lengths.

An excellent short example of this style in German is "Wandrers Nachtlied II" (the only serious German poem that I understand). Can any reader suggest other examples in English?

Words? Last time, I picked three words from "On Time". This time, I'll pick three words from "Wandrers Nachtlied II", translated for your convenience:

peace
breath
silence or silent or hush (your choice)

Thank you!

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Night Falls.
[info]cadhla
2004-04-15 02:12 am UTC (link)
Silence steals my breath away;
Night falls.
Peace slips in; she'll never stay.
Night calls.
Hush my darling, don't you sing --
Hope dreams within these silent walls
Where Faith is queen,
Where Time is king.
Peace comes -- I never see her go --
And where Truth is, I'll never know --
But when Night calls, we all obey.
Her thralls.

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Re: Night Falls. - [info]patoadam, 2004-04-17 08:09 am UTC (Expand)

[info]pocketnaomi
2004-03-22 11:22 pm UTC (link)
bath, egg, circus.

If these were not too sadistic, any rhyming style, please.

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When You're Grown.
[info]cadhla
2004-04-15 02:24 am UTC (link)
Grace, when you're grown, you can dance in the circus;
You'll be the best acrobat there's ever been.
You'll dress up of feathers and fine silver sequins,
And flash through the air like a fairy tale queen.

Grace, when you're grown, you can quest for a pheonix;
You can search all the mountains and scan all the land.
You'll find a bright egg and you'll carry it homewards,
Cupping it close in the palm of your hand.

Grace, when you're grown, you can go be a mermaid,
And take all your baths in the shining bright seas.
Grace, when you're grown, you can go be a pirate --
Only promise that you'll still sail homeward for tea.

Grace, when you're grown, then the world's in your keeping;
This is the best gift I can make to you.
Now, though, you're small, and I'm watching you sleeping...
But someday your wishes, Grace, all will come true.

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Re: When You're Grown. - [info]pocketnaomi, 2004-04-15 03:10 am UTC (Expand)
Re: When You're Grown. - [info]kitanzi, 2004-04-15 11:32 am UTC (Expand)
Re: When You're Grown. - [info]pocketnaomi, 2004-04-15 11:47 am UTC (Expand)
Further reply - [info]pocketnaomi, 2004-04-15 11:33 am UTC (Expand)
Re: Further reply - [info]cadhla, 2004-04-15 11:37 am UTC (Expand)
Re: When You're Grown. - [info]katyhh, 2004-04-15 11:38 am UTC (Expand)
Re: When You're Grown. - [info]bardling, 2004-04-16 01:17 am UTC (Expand)

[info]mrlogic
2004-03-22 11:46 pm UTC (link)
selkie
destiny
invitation

Any song form, please.

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[info]mrlogic
2004-03-23 10:58 am UTC (link)
I notice that these look to be rather like what [info]delennara's ended up as...please let me know if you want me to submit something different.

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Halfbred. - [info]cadhla, 2004-04-15 11:01 am UTC (Expand)
Re: Halfbred. - [info]mrlogic, 2004-04-15 11:13 am UTC (Expand)

[info]bardling
2004-03-23 01:57 am UTC (link)
path
choice
grow

An ovillejo perhaps?

*beams & bounces at you doing this again!!!* *hugs*

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Choices.
[info]cadhla
2004-04-15 11:11 am UTC (link)
Grip the blade, although you'll bleed;
You need
To see the path ahead before you break.
To make
Your way, you have to voice
The choice:
To sing and laugh, to grow, rejoice,
Or whether you would rather stay
In shadowed woods and wait for day...
You need to make the choice.

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Re: Choices. - [info]bardling, 2004-04-15 03:56 pm UTC (Expand)

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